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November 12, 2007
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:iconomniscient-naratress:
My third haiku !
(Please, renember these ARE 5-7-5 haiku. But many japanese letters (when these are kanji) are counting several syllables.

暗い森
A dark forest
路はだんだん
the way, like stairs, is gradually
消えてゆく
disappearing away

(to me, it is also related to the song "A forest" by Nouvelle Vague)
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Mood: Caring *Rousteinire Nov 13, 2007  Student General Artist
I love it!
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:iconomniscient-naratress:
Thank you very much !!!
I'm glad you like it !
(and thank you for the fav too)
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Very nice Haiku! I wrote a whole book of haiku once, [link] if you're intrested.

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My site: [link] :hug:
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:iconomniscient-naratress:
Oh ! So you are on lulu ?
It's a nice thing to know =D !
I think I'll try to buy your Haiku book one day, but Right now I can't, because I don't have a bank acount ._."... But I read the first ones and it looks funny XD !

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